Love hurts
When I dream about the future,
Your fingers you snap
When I talk about a life together
You turn your back
Yet when I confess my love
You gladly accept
This is getting too confusing
I never know what is the next step
I spend entire nights just crying
I spend whole days just thinking
Who is the one at fault here?
Who is the one to blame?
I know I promised I wouldn’t talk this way
I know I swore that we’ll live only for today
But if you truly love me why are you afraid?
On these unknown grounds, why do you refuse to tread?
Your fingers you snap
When I talk about a life together
You turn your back
Yet when I confess my love
You gladly accept
This is getting too confusing
I never know what is the next step
I spend entire nights just crying
I spend whole days just thinking
Who is the one at fault here?
Who is the one to blame?
I know I promised I wouldn’t talk this way
I know I swore that we’ll live only for today
But if you truly love me why are you afraid?
On these unknown grounds, why do you refuse to tread?
11 Comments:
hey ...thats such a wonderful poem :)
awesome......really too good....i cud picturise and feel it....Gr8 job.
thanks white forest and deppnair..glad that you appreciate my efforts :-)
He nice poems....me too a poetry lover cum MBA....
Nice work :)
Strange blog. Quite unstable in character, mood, and expression. But still coherent somehow.
love hurts...but not always..it deserves a second chance a third one one...and another one
:-)
hi.. found u on orkut and reached here... im a lover of poetry.. wish i could write that way.. amazing stuff.. all thats on this page.. especially your first one.. that's just , well, beautiful..
The simplicity and straightforwardness of the verses making endearing..and i bet we all could feel the resonance of the words in our lives
Heyy ..nice poem..really touching...keep it up..
You'll see me coming here again & again ;)
just two words for this one aps...
"painfully beautiful"
just two words for this one aps...
"painfully beautiful"
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