Friday, March 03, 2006

Love hurts

When I dream about the future,
Your fingers you snap
When I talk about a life together
You turn your back

Yet when I confess my love
You gladly accept
This is getting too confusing
I never know what is the next step

I spend entire nights just crying
I spend whole days just thinking
Who is the one at fault here?
Who is the one to blame?

I know I promised I wouldn’t talk this way
I know I swore that we’ll live only for today
But if you truly love me why are you afraid?
On these unknown grounds, why do you refuse to tread?

11 Comments:

Blogger SeePearrl said...

hey ...thats such a wonderful poem :)

3/06/2006 4:47 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

awesome......really too good....i cud picturise and feel it....Gr8 job.

3/07/2006 5:02 PM  
Blogger The Lone Ranger said...

thanks white forest and deppnair..glad that you appreciate my efforts :-)

3/07/2006 6:29 PM  
Blogger coolvir said...

He nice poems....me too a poetry lover cum MBA....
Nice work :)

3/09/2006 10:17 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Strange blog. Quite unstable in character, mood, and expression. But still coherent somehow.

4/06/2006 8:03 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

love hurts...but not always..it deserves a second chance a third one one...and another one

:-)

5/03/2006 10:41 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hi.. found u on orkut and reached here... im a lover of poetry.. wish i could write that way.. amazing stuff.. all thats on this page.. especially your first one.. that's just , well, beautiful..

5/14/2006 8:41 PM  
Blogger Heidi said...

The simplicity and straightforwardness of the verses making endearing..and i bet we all could feel the resonance of the words in our lives

5/24/2006 2:12 PM  
Blogger Cuckoo said...

Heyy ..nice poem..really touching...keep it up..
You'll see me coming here again & again ;)

8/28/2006 12:06 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

just two words for this one aps...

"painfully beautiful"

12/09/2006 1:52 AM  
Blogger neil said...

just two words for this one aps...

"painfully beautiful"

12/09/2006 1:53 AM  

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